The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the line graph
revealing
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reveals
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information on
price
alterations of fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks from 1978
till
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to
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2009 in comparison with
customer-
Correct article usage
the customer-price
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price
index
. At the onset, the
price
of fresh fruits and vegetables increased exponentially,
whereas
there was a steady upturn in other products listed during the 30-year period. At the first glance,
it is clear that
there were almost no differences in the cost of all categories at over $60 in 1979. Over the
next
8 years, the
price
of all food products rose modestly, in spite of certain marginal fluctuations, to approximately $100
that
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which
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was quite akin to the consumer-
price
index
. In the
last
20-year period, increasing from $125 in 1989 to $325 in 2009, fresh fruits and vegetables were considered to be
a
Correct article usage
the
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most expensive food product which is far higher than consumer
index
price
. When it comes to other food goods that
lower
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are lower
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than
consumer
Correct article usage
the consumer
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index
price
, it is apparent that the cost of sugars and sweets reached
to
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apply
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roughly $200 in the provided
last
year,
while
the
price
of soft drinks accounted
almost
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for almost
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$150

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, index with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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