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The government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Thus it’s the governments’ responsibility to ban alcohol and tobacco as they are addictive substances and harmful.How do you feel about this approach? do you agree or disagree ?

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Dear Rohan, I am writing to thank you for your invitation. Unfortunately, I am unable to accept your invitation due to my current work schedule. Let me explain my situation in more detail. I have recently been promoted to project leader and have been assigned a new client. The work pressure is immense and
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 have very strict deadlines to meet. As exciting as it sounds working with
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 would love to stay with you and meet your family. We can explore the countryside and visit places that we had discussed over the phone. My project will be wrapped up in the
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 will be available around new year, I can plan a trip in my new year's holiday to visit you. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Truly, Mrinal
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