Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
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, social media has its risks. As people of all ages have access to social media, children are more prone and can easily Linking Words
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environment, but still at some point they are still bullied by their bullies on social media which sometimes disturbs the children mentally so badly that they end up committing suicide.
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Furthermore
, social media can be problematic for adults as well. Sometimes it affects their jobs as well, the way they are positing and sharing their information on social websites. Linking Words
For example
, when they post about things which they don’t even do in their real lives. They can indirectly cause a bad impression on other people and as well as on their employers and if in case the employer judges the Linking Words
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might cost you your job or sometimes it is difficult to keep or attain your job if you present yourself as a different person on social media.
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, if people are more aware while using and sharing their personal information on social media and only post respectful and respectable Linking Words
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definitely the advantages of social media outweighs the disadvantages. Linking Words
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