You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table compares how many males and females were employed in
factories
in England and Wales in half a century period.
Overall
, both the number
of male and female workers
significantly declined over the period although
the number
of factories
increased by almost three folds.
At the beginning of the period, the amount of 287,100 males
Change the noun form
male
workers
and 190,000 female workers
were employed, and it was nearly half a million employees in 225 factories
in England and Wales. In contrast
, fifty years later, the rate workers
declined to the lowest amount of 31,000 Change preposition
of workers
male
and 30000 females got jobs in 600 Fix the agreement mistake
males
factories
in the UK.
In 1861 and 1871, the number
of male labor
sharply decreased from 131,780 to 80,123 and the rate of Change the spelling
labour
the
female Correct article usage
apply
also
decreased 160,000
to 60,000, Change preposition
from 160,000
however
, the number
of factories
increased from 227 to 622 in England and Wales.
Moreover
, the male
worker slightly decreased Correct quantifier usage
number of male
76,132
to 65,000 from 1881 to 1891 and female Change preposition
from 76,132
workers
decreased 10,000
in the Change preposition
by 10,000
next
ten years from 60,000 in 1881. The figures for these two different periods show that the number
of factories
slightly decreased from 721 to 625.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words factories, number, workers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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