Do the dangers derived from use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh its advantages

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Task 2
Food
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is an essential need for the
homosapiens
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homo sapiens
.
Accept space
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Because of the variation in seasons for crops, it is important to store
food
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with chemicals.
Although
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these chemicals can be detrimental to human health, the merits in
production
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and
preservation
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outweighs
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
risks. On the one hand, chemicals added to
food
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either during
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
production
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or
preservation
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can affect human health. Because these additives are mixed with
food
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products, so both the
food
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and chemicals are consumed together. Even though the
food
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is beneficial, so many people
reacts
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react
to the added chemicals. To illustrate,
chemical
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a chemical
are added
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is added
to beans for
preservation
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over a long period of time. FDA reported that 80% of hospital admissions in North Carolina
was
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were
due to
consumption
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the consumption
of the beans. It was discovered that these patients were allergic to the chemicals.
In addition
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, some of these preservatives are potential causes of cancer. As it was documented by
German researcher
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German researchers
a German researcher
, maize preserved with chemicals can cause Colon cancer.
Therefore
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, prolonged exposure to these chemicals can result in ill-health.
On the other hand
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, chemicals are beneficial for
food
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storage and
production
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. In the absence of it, our
food
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will spoil. Because micro-organisms will have the opportunity to mesmerise with our
food
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resulting in damages.
For instance
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, additives are added to our perishables which are transported to other countries. If these chemicals are not added, the
food
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will perish before getting to their intended destinations.
Moreso
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, ability to use chemical products in
production
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facilitate
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facilitates
growth of crops.
For example
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, fertilizers
are
introduces an alternative
or
chemicals added to our crops to speed up
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
yield.
Hence
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, it is beneficial in prolonged storage of
food
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and acceleration of harvest time. In conclusion, I believe the benefits of chemical used in
food
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production
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and
preservation
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outweighs
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outweigh
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
draw backs
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
because of the ability to stop microbes from spoiling our stored
food
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and improvement in the area of harvest time.
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