Some people think that there are things individual can do to help prevent global climate change.Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only government and Large businesses that can make a difference.

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Task 2 Progressive
climate
change
is becoming a global challenge. Some quarters believe that individual efforts to prevent
this
is of no use. Others,
however
, believe that only government and large businesses can make a stop or disallow
this
occurrence. In my opinion, even though the actions taken by
individual
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an individual
individuals
cannot be ignored,
efforts
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the efforts
of the government and business tycoons are much more significant especially in the areas of policy making and renewable energy. On the one hand, a lot of people have realised that reduction in burning fossil fuels is reducing global warming. Global warming
resulted
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has resulted
from human activities
such
as burning of fossil fuels. Individual efforts to reduce
this
fuel,
as a result
reduce the emission of carbon
dioxide which
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dioxide, which
has been implicated in global warming with other
green house
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greenhouse
gases (methane and nitrogen oxide).
For instance
, Environmental Protection Agency (EPA
)
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recognized the efforts of a few Australians who decided to opt for alternatives to fossil fuel which ultimately reduce global warming and
climate
change
.
Therefore
, their individual actions
was
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were
beneficial.
On the other hand
, Government and investors have major roles to play. Government policies enacted into laws have slow down the rate of
climate
change
. To illustrate, United Nations encourage all governments in the
last
global summit to enforce the law of "low carbon dioxide emission' because it was revealed by scientist that
this
law has drastically
slow
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slowed
down the rate of
climate
change
especially in the atmosphere, hydrosphere, lithosphere and
cryosphere
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Cryosphere
.
Moreso
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, investors that showed interest in renewable energy which is an
alternatives
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alternative
to fossil fuel have been really helpful in
this
regard. An example is what was reported by NASA that increasing investors in renewable energy have directly reduced the rate of carbon dioxide emission which is beneficial
for
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to
the
climate
system.
Hence
, Executives and business magnates significantly reduced the
climate
change
. In conclusion, though personal efforts to prevent
climate
change
is relevant, authorities and investors have principal roles to play in slowing down
this
challenge in my candid opinion.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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