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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences

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It is considered by some individuals that foreign tourists should follow local traditions, whereas
others
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Others
 believe that they had the right to follow their on
custom
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customs
 traditions. In my opinion irrespective of country every individual has a right to follow their own culture. Tourists who are visiting other nations
,
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,
 can
also
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 follow local customs of that particular country or region because it brings all individuals of different countries under one umbrella
.
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 It is one of the major sources for building good
relation
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relationships
 between two countries
whcih
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
 indirectly impacts the development of the national economy. India and US relations are building stronger and stronger day by day, mainly due to the acceptance of cultural heritage like clothing and language.
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, we should respect the customs and traditions of the foreigners too, because eventually it will lead to a holy and prosperous environment.
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, it is difficult to inculcate new local food habits by a foreign visitor.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural understanding
  • cultural harmony
  • local customs and behaviours
  • host country's traditions
  • unintentional offense
  • enhance the travel experience
  • cultural fabric
  • inclusive society
  • diverse society
  • global understanding
  • mutual respect
  • respect for local customs
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