Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer Nations. However, the government of richer Nations should take responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such area. What is your opinion?

Poor nations experience development when there is improvement in the public service like the health and educational sectors as well as trade relations.

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it is believed by some people that the government of developed countries ought to be responsible in aiding under developed countries in

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regard. In my opinion, I agree that rich countries should contribute in developing poor countries as it is greatly beneficial to humanity. When impoverished countries are aided by wealthy nations, they bridge the gap of

developement

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

developments

between them. Their citizens would have the opportunity to access amenities that are essential to their existence and sustenance as humans. On top of that, they are unlikely to consider themselves as lesser humans when compared to their counterparts in developed countries.

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, in East Africa, the survey carried out revealed that most Africans likened visiting America as heaven and didn't consider themselves qualified.

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, if poorer countries are aided, there will not be

huge difference

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a huge difference

between them and other developed nations

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, the underdeveloped nation will experience a boost in their economy if they are allowed to gain greater share of benefits in trades with

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developing

nations. Put differently, their economy becomes stronger, currency would gain greater relevance

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of their profitable trade dealings with rich countries, which ultimately translates to a better standard of living for its citizens. Considering China as a case study, they enjoyed

trade aid

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trade, aid

from the United States, and today, they have the highest number of billionaires in the world. In conclusion, while others may have varying opinion, I believe that not only would the living conditions of people in

under developed

relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

underdeveloped

countries be better, but it would

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close the margin in development when compared with rich countries.