You bought a new HD television last week. At first it seemed to work perfectly but after a few hours a line appeared across the TV and the sound seemed a little strange. You cannot take the TV back to the shop so you decide to write to them. Write a letter of complaint to the shop. In your letter • give them the background information • describe the problem • ask them to resolve the issue

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain regarding the HD Television I have purchased from your shop on 15th September, from your banjara hills branch. I have attached a copy of my invoice. I was jubilant to see my new TV and it was always seemed to be working properly. Later, a line with a mix of black and blue

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has appeared suddenly on the screen.

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, there is

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a problem with the sound, as it sounding

little

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wired. I tried to solve

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problem by checking the connectivity. But all seems to be fine. I thought of getting

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the TV

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directly to your shop but couldn’t do it. I would really appreciate

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you can send your engineer to resolve

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problem as earliest. And replace it if possible. As we are unable to watch our

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shows and

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missing out our important seminar which was casting at the local channel.

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is disappointing as a customer. I never expected an item like

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from your shop. Looking forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Irfana Subhani

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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