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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

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To prepare children for modern world subjects like
art
 and
music
 should not be included in Curriculum, but included some useful subjects like information technology.
This
 essay will discuss that
arts
Suggestion
art
 and
music
 is
also
 as important as other subjects. Subjects like
art
 and
music
 can develop critical thinking in students.
This
 type of thinking can help a student in many problems as it helps to develop problem solving ability in him. Students
can
Suggestion
can also assess
also
 assesses their
work
 as critical thinking help them to develop
ability
Suggestion
the ability
abilities
 of evaluation. They can
also
 make
right decision
Suggestion
right decisions
a right decision
 and judge their
work
. So to acquire critical thinking
art
 and
music
 can help children.
Art
 and
music
also
 help a student to acquire creative thinking, as
this
 thinking can help them to think out of the box. He can deal problems with new and creative ideas at
work
 or anywhere else. He can do a given task with a new idea and
this
 will boost his confidence by being unique at
work
.
This
 type of thinking can help him to see everything with his own perspective. In conclusion,
art
 and
music
 brings critical thinking and creative thinking in children which can help them in future. Critical thinking
develop
Suggestion
develops
ablities
the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
abilities
 like judgment, evaluation and problem solving. With creative thinking children can come up with fresh ideas.
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