Nowadays, many people buy household goods (like television, rice cookers etc). Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These

days many

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days, many

families

depends

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depend

mostly on electronic goods in their houses,

sush

to so extreme a degree

such

as rise cooker, TV and

dishs

a piece of dishware normally used as a container for holding or serving food

dish

washing machine which may cost them a large amount of money.

Although

these electronic gadgets would ease their life, but it has many negative consequences.

To begin

with, in these

modren

belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages

modern

Modern

life both

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lives, both

lives both

woman and man are working and most of their time

are spent

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is spent

in the work. In

such

circumstances, they become physically

tierd

depleted of strength or energy

tired

tied

with these overload

work

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works

and may not have the ability to do household

choars

a specific piece of work required to be done as a duty or for a specific fee

chores

such

as cooking.

Thus

, they rely on these electronic facilities to help them.

However

,

such

trend could lead to

lossing

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

losing

loosing

many skills,

for example

, when a

women

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woman

woman's

use

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uses

rise cooker, she may loss the sense of creativity in the

kichen

a room equipped for preparing meals

kitchen

.

Therefore

, lake of skills can be stated as one of the negative results

for

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of

this

trend.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

, buying these household goods could lead to

budget deficit

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a budget deficit

of the family.

Also

, it consumed a huge amount

fo

connects a noun with the preceding word

of

energy which may have a great

influnce

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influence

influences

on

family

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the family

financiallly

from a financial point of view

financially

. To illustrate, most of these electronic devices

such

as

water heater

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a water heater

and electrical oven consumed by far the highest amount of electricity that supplied to the house which in order to will rise the outstanding bills to

unfavorable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

prices.

In addition

,

this

energy means more

oils

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oil

burning which

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burning, which

will affect

environment

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the environment

negatively. In conclusion, after a careful analysis of

this

trend, I believe that buy a lot of electronic goods means more energy needs for a house which ends by bad

influnce

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influence

influences

on the environment.