Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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instead
of doing
job
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the job
a job
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many prefer to be
enterprenur
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an entrepreneur
entrepreneur
entrepreneurs
.They believe by running their own business
provide
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are provided
them
flexiblity
the property of being flexible; easily bent or shaped
flexibility
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However
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there are certain drawbacks of
selfemployement
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self-employment
are apparent.
To begin
with
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Those who thinks
selfemployment
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self employment
is
better option
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a better option
then doing job
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than doing a job
than doing job
for any company or organisation because of more income and flexibility of
work
time
.In their own business
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if
person
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the person
a person
is clever or intelligent
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they can
verywell
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very well
grow their income
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without regards to their age experience.
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Which therefore is
therefore
not possible in jobs.
Moreover
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person
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a person
people
can
work
with their own flexibility of
time
.They
donot
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do not
require to follow a particular office
time
schedule or need to take permission from anyone for
holidays
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the holidays
.He or she will be his own boss. With despite of the above fact
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there are few negative aspect of running own business are possible.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
of all
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uncertanity
being unsettled or in doubt or dependent on chance
uncertainty
of market.As we all now that currently we live in
uncertain world
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an uncertain world
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any would could face some tragedy like
fire
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a fire
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drought and
sono
precipitation falling from clouds in the form of ice crystals
snow
sauna
.In
such
cases
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it is difficult for
enterprenur
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
to cover up easily from loss.
On the contrary
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in the jobs after any ups and downs employ still entitled for fixed
sallary
something that remunerates
salary
.Another disadvantage of
selfemployment
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self employment
is hard to escape from
work
due to huge and sole responsibility.
For instance
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many people in India
work
as
a
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an
enterprenur
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneur
interpreter
and enjoyed very limited holidays
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Because
its
it is
it's
difficult for them to close their shops and companies so often. In conclusion
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there is no doubt that
selfemployment
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self employment
can provides us more ease and
revenue but
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revenue, but
at the same
time
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also has
some kind of risk.
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