Some people believe that if people are allowed to buy guns, they will be able to protect themselves and the crime rate can be lower. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The Graph Illustrates change in
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of passengers travelling through London Underground
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during different hours It can be seen that the when the
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opens, the
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of passengers is the lowest which is 100 passengers during 6:00am, and the minimum usage of
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be seen at 16:00. The underground
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is mostly used by passengers from 7:00 to 8:00 and the
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of passengers
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dramatically from 100 to 200 during 6:00 to 7:00,
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of passengers again starts falling and decreases to less than 200 at 10:00. After 10:00,
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of passengers again gradually
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to 300 until 14:00. We can notice a decrease again from 14:00 to 16:00. After 16:00 the
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dramatically to about 380 during 5 hours. We can see a slight
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and fall after 20:00 till 22:00. It is visible that the peak hours, in which the
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is used by passengers are 8:00 and 18:00 and the time when the
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of passengers are lowest is in the morning at 6:00, evening at 16:00 and during night at 20:00 and 22:00.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advocate
  • debate
  • controversial
  • firearm
  • self-defense
  • crime prevention
  • deterrence
  • gun violence
  • gun control laws
  • public safety
  • accidental discharge
  • suicide prevention
  • impulsive
  • accessibility
  • legislation
  • firearm regulation
  • balancing
  • individual rights
  • crime rate
  • violence
  • arguments
  • opponents
  • supporters
  • proponents
  • second amendment
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