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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities
Shopping is a biggest activity in each
one
’s life. It is a daily activity to majority people. Because we all do
shopping
Suggestion
the shopping
 for our needs, comforts and luxuries. Till the
last
 2
decades we
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decades, we
 had only
one
 mode of shopping. We all changed and changing since evolution and so do
this
 shopping. The way we do many activities in daily life is changing with each invention and
this
 is accelerating at a very
highspeed
operating at high speed
high-speed
 after the invention of
internet
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the internet
. Internet for sure changed many things around me and shopping is
one
 of them. Online shopping is the new cool thing to the many people. Who
fall
the lapse of mankind into sinfulness because of the sin of Adam and Eve
Fall
 in the era of millennials and Gen Z. In the process of evolution and the march towards progress our priorities changed, ex: saving time to save money, saving for travel to saving for jewellery. The modern lifestyle prefers to save time to save money and
this
behavioral
of or relating to behavior
behavioural
 change has given birth to many
industrial
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industry
 changes in the world. Online shopping is
one
 of the biggest
behavioral
of or relating to behavior
behavioural
 change because it changed the course of
way
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the way
 the business is done, consumer preferences, consumer perception, transportation and even automobile industry. We should agree that all these changes are visible in the society around you. Online shopping
is significantly promoting
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has significantly promoted
 itself with the growth of technology
such
 as mobile inventions and apps in
smartphones
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smart phones
. Today we all became consumers of online because we are always online. Online shopping has given several jobs to
large number
Suggestion
large numbers
the large number
a large number
 of people
such
 as delivery guys, and packing. IT
also
 pooled in all the big and small sellers under
one
 umbrella to serve customers who are looking for products in all the ranges. Online shopping is serving
larger number
Suggestion
larger numbers
a larger number
 of consumers each day and saving their time in the busy lives we are all going through. Online shopping has its
merits demerits
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merits, demerits
 just like another new technology in the world, like killing the real customer and seller relation and real estate because you don’t have to own a store to sell a product. But I conclude her saying Online shopping will remain as long as we the Internet is alive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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