The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities

Shopping is a biggest activity in each

one

’s life. It is a daily activity to majority people. Because we all do

shopping

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the shopping

for our needs, comforts and luxuries. Till the

last

decades we

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decades, we

had only

one

mode of shopping. We all changed and changing since evolution and so do

this

shopping. The way we do many activities in daily life is changing with each invention and

this

is accelerating at a very

highspeed

operating at high speed

high-speed

after the invention of

internet

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the internet

. Internet for sure changed many things around me and shopping is

one

of them. Online shopping is the new cool thing to the many people. Who

fall

the lapse of mankind into sinfulness because of the sin of Adam and Eve

Fall

in the era of millennials and Gen Z. In the process of evolution and the march towards progress our priorities changed, ex: saving time to save money, saving for travel to saving for jewellery. The modern lifestyle prefers to save time to save money and

this

behavioral

of or relating to behavior

behavioural

change has given birth to many

industrial

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industry

changes in the world. Online shopping is

one

of the biggest

behavioral

of or relating to behavior

behavioural

change because it changed the course of

way

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the way

the business is done, consumer preferences, consumer perception, transportation and even automobile industry. We should agree that all these changes are visible in the society around you. Online shopping

is significantly promoting

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has significantly promoted

itself with the growth of technology

such

as mobile inventions and apps in

smartphones

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smart phones

. Today we all became consumers of online because we are always online. Online shopping has given several jobs to

large number

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large numbers

the large number

a large number

of people

such

as delivery guys, and packing. IT

also

pooled in all the big and small sellers under

one

umbrella to serve customers who are looking for products in all the ranges. Online shopping is serving

larger number

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larger numbers

a larger number

of consumers each day and saving their time in the busy lives we are all going through. Online shopping has its

merits demerits

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merits, demerits

just like another new technology in the world, like killing the real customer and seller relation and real estate because you don’t have to own a store to sell a product. But I conclude her saying Online shopping will remain as long as we the Internet is alive.

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