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Some people believe that educational establishments should multiply the exams which learners take, while others think this is just a waste of time and strength. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #establishments #exams #learners #waste #time #strength
Examin
ation is te
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The examination
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hich
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a test
the test
 aim to
de
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aims
termine studen
ts abili
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students'
student's
ty. Some people think that educational institutions should multiply the exams, while others consid
ered it is on
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considered, it
ly wasting time and power. On the one hand, testing is one optimal indicator to define pupil'
s level. Exam
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a pupil's level
ination leads to sense of competition among students, helps them to develop self p
ersonality and confi
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personality and self
dence. Passing and taking high scores in exams contributed to amplifying self-esteem. Students with high performances are able to open bright
way for t
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a bright way
heir future. Mostly, they will provided with good job placement and remuneration and due to examination formed tolerance to different kinds of problem. It helps them, especially, during the working.
Additionally
, owing to mass exams only one can judge of many students' ability at the same time.
On the other hand
, exams are a source of stress and depression. Almost all students experienced physical and psychological difficulties before and during exams. Naturally, it leads to some diseases
such
 as headache, nausea, neurot
icism and s
o on. Students who are fallen from exams lost their self-esteem and confidence and unfortunately, sometimes it may caused to the
t
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by
endency of suicide.
In addition
, examination is not real t
est.
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a real test
the real test
For instance
, a person with less grade may achieve to successful, and oppositely who have h
igh
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has
levels may lose progress in life. From my point of view, students have to understand that, exams are not permanent estimate and most important is not only getting high levels in the exams, signif
icant thing is ac
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the significant thing
hieving great
objective in li
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a great objective
fe and acquire opportunity to live healthy. In conclusion, there are a lot of pros and cons of exams which are mentioned above,
howeve
r people shoul
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however, people
d understand meanin
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the meaning
ifference of taking exams and achieving success in life.

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