The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the cause of this ? what can be done to solve this problem.

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increase in producing of consumption goods has impacted to the natural environment. In my opinion, it can be attributed to several reasons and a number of solutions should be conducted to tackle
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problem.
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of all, the population of the world in some countries has increased rapidly.
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, the demands of consumer goods that people have to spend a lot of their money to buy these products for their daily necessity.
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, they use cleaning products
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as detergent to wash their dress and clothes, soap for taking a shower.
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, one the biggest threats to the environment is
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we are
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producing ever greater quantities of
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, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans because the consumption goods have become the most important items in human life and the less aware of littering, so people usually throw trash in publics
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as bottle of plastic and nylon bag.
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the government
could make more effort to reduce
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. They should introduce laws to limit
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from factories or companies and force households to use renewable energy from solar, water power. By the way, the personal encouragement limits to use
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a plastic bag
plastic bag
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which choose products with less packaging and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for customers for recycling glass, plastic and paper in our the environmental life. By doing so, we can help to reduce significantly
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and the environment will be so beautiful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production
  • consumer goods
  • natural environment
  • damage
  • causes
  • overconsumption
  • demand
  • environmental regulations
  • enforcement
  • natural resources
  • industrial pollution
  • waste
  • inadequate
  • waste management practices
  • public awareness
  • education
  • sustainable alternatives
  • stricter environmental laws
  • recycling
  • responsible consumption
  • clean technologies
  • renewable energy
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