The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012
The bar chart shows the proportion of men and
women
who taught in seven different faculties
of a particular university in 2012.
There was a large gender disparity in some faculties
: engineering was dominated by male academics
whereas
education had the highest percentage of female academics
. Notably, 85% of the engineering teachers were male and only 15% female. Three quarters
of the academic staff in education were Add a hyphen
Three-quarters
women
, with just 25% males. However
, other faculties
were more balanced in their composition. In medicine, gender representation was almost equal, while
in arts subjects slightly more than half the academics
were female (55%). It is interesting to note that business and science had the same proportions of men and women
, with 65% male to 35% female academics
in those faculties
. Law had a slightly higher percentage of women
at 40%.
Although
the faculties
of engineering, busines
, science and law were still primarily Correct your spelling
business
male- dominated
in 2012, Correct your spelling
male-dominated
women
made up half the faculty of medicine and were predominated in education and arts.Submitted by s.falmaghlouth on
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