The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012
The bar chart shows the proportion of men and
women
who taught in seven different Use synonyms
faculties
of a particular university in 2012.
There was a large gender disparity in some Use synonyms
faculties
: engineering was dominated by male Use synonyms
academics
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whereas
education had the highest percentage of female Linking Words
academics
. Notably, 85% of the engineering teachers were male and only 15% female. Use synonyms
Three quarters
of the academic staff in education were Add a hyphen
Three-quarters
women
, with just 25% males. Use synonyms
However
, other Linking Words
faculties
were more balanced in their composition. In medicine, gender representation was almost equal, Use synonyms
while
in arts subjects slightly more than half the Linking Words
academics
were female (55%). It is interesting to note that business and science had the same proportions of men and Use synonyms
women
, with 65% male to 35% female Use synonyms
academics
in those Use synonyms
faculties
. Law had a slightly higher percentage of Use synonyms
women
at 40%.
Use synonyms
Although
the Linking Words
faculties
of engineering, Use synonyms
busines
, science and law were still primarily Correct your spelling
business
male- dominated
in 2012, Correct your spelling
male-dominated
women
made up half the faculty of medicine and were predominated in education and arts.Use synonyms
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