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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other older people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes, the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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In the UK, many old people start to live in the old age homes, so that they could be taken
care
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 by the nurses there. The expenses of the
care
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 are sometimes paid by the
government
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. In my opinion, its the foremost duty of both the
government
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 and the family.
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, the
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 should provide the
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 as the person has paid the tax throughout their lives
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 Most of the countries have the policy to generate revenue from the working section to provide
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then
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them
 various facilities
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 as roads, houses and hospitals.So it becomes the duty of the authorities to look after these peoples’ expenses.
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, certain
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 or families might not be able to pay. Some families might be
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poor, so
 cannot afford these expenditures.
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Therefore, as
 the
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 has separate budgets for pensions.
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Hence, they
 could use those funds to look after the old ones.
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, families
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 have the
responsibilty
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responsibility
 to take
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 of their old
members
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. These old people are usually their parents and grandparents. They might have invested their whole life and money for their kids. So now it becomes the duty of these adults to pay respect to them and to help their members in their difficult time. In conclusion, old people are the important individuals of our society, as they contribute to it through their experience and learnings. So it becomes the responsibility of both the
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 and the families to look after them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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