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Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree

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In today's common world, most of the children who are obtaining some extra- curricular activities beyond education.
Moreover
, the public opinion is different about the educational burden.Whereas force open more educational knowledge leads to mental illness and disorder. In my view, I strongly disagree that, the educational priority
were
Suggestion
was
 more equally important to
children
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child
 carrier and their life. One of the most relevant reason is, that I believe in children's leisure time should have some extra-curricular activities
such
 as yoga, singing, dance etc.
Moreover
,
this
 kind of activities can lead to peace of mind and relaxation, keep the body more good and healthy. Whereas a student focus only in his studies, it may lead to brain and health related problems.The
second
 relevant reason is, the
children
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child
child's
 studies are not developed in a proper manner, his/her another option is extra skills can help
their
objective case of they
them
further
 life's. Skills which can make a person's identity more different.
In addition
 to
this
 point, children's can change their platform incase they do not perform well in studies.So they can strongly choose various
kind
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kinds
 of knowledge. But the talent and concentration were most equally important for skill development. Parents are more responsible for their children and to motivate them as well as guide their life properly. Parents can identify that what kind of talent
are hiding
Suggestion
is hiding
 behind their knowledge.
However
, teachers can
also
 play the part
to
Suggestion
of
 their students. To conclude, only educational activities in leisure time are not a waste of time.Those which can improve the person ability and skills if he/she have talented in that criteria.
However
, I strongly agree that, the leisure activities are more interesting and are very important for all children's in the world

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