Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#price #petrol #traffic #pollution

I strongly disagree

Suggestion

with

the above statement as despite the petrol price being

high people will

Suggestion

high, people will

still use their vehicle to the extent they used to do it as usual. The another solution to the growing

traffic

and pollution is that people should make the optimum utilisation of the vehicles and there's a use of following stringent

traffic

rules so is to

aviod

stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something

avoid

the

traffic

. Now-a-days people are more literate for which they follow the regular

traffic

rules and if some of them don't, the

traffic

regulations have

also

increased, by which they are levied the required charges upon breaking the

traffic

rules.

Tue Oct 01 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

103 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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discourage
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sustainable economy
disproportionately affect
daily commuting
infrastructure
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people think that the government should ban dangerous sports.Others say that the society should be allowed to freely participate in any

More and more people are leaving countryside to live in cities. Do more advantages or disadvantages of this development for environment

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