Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

I strongly disagree
to
Suggestion
with
the above statement as despite the petrol price being
high people will
Suggestion
high, people will
still use their vehicle to the extent they used to do it as usual. The another solution to the growing
traffic
and pollution is that people should make the optimum utilisation of the vehicles and there's a use of following stringent
traffic
rules so is to
aviod
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
the
traffic
. Now-a-days people are more literate for which they follow the regular
traffic
rules and if some of them don't, the
traffic
regulations have
also
increased, by which they are levied the required charges upon breaking the
traffic
rules.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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