The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The information that had been displayed in the pie charts describes
about
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apply
the
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apply
water
usage
for various purposes like industries,agriculture
and domestic use
.This
information is completely focused on six different countries and the percent
that each area is accessed.
Almost in every country Replace the word
percentage
agriculture
was the major one in consuming water
except Europe
with a
least Change the article
the
usage
.But in Europe
domestic use
of water
was nearly half of its agricultural usage
. On a
whole Central Correct article usage
the
Asia
holds the first place in the
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apply
agriculture
for the intake of water
, whereas
domestic usage
in any country had not exceeded 20 percent
.In terms of Change the spelling
per cent
water
use
by agriculture
, the increasing order of the countries are
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is
Europe
,North America
,South America
,South East Asia
,Africa,Central
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and Central
Asia
.Europe
,North
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and North
America
was the industrially largest water
intakes others were using almost same
.Africa and South East Correct article usage
the same
Asia
were two countries using similarly
in every aspect.
South America
is doing average in all the sectors like agriculture
,industry,domestic
Correct word choice
and domestic
use
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, agriculture, use, europe, asia, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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