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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrated the proportion in
four
 different
meals
 of
Sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
. It is obvious that dinner
have
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has
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a
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the
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 largest
percentage
in
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of
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sodium
 and saturated, 43% and 37%, and
as
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is
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 the
second
 largest in added
sugar
 which contributes 23% in
four
meals
. By
the
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apply
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contrast, lunch has 29%
consume
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consumption
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 of
sodium
 and 26% of saturated fat, but only
at
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apply
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the
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third
 place in added
sugar
 (19%).
Breakfast
 and
snacks
 consume below average in almost three types of
meals
. The proportion of each three nutrients in
breakfast
 is all the lowest of the
four
meals
, 14%, 16% and 16% respectively.
Although
snacks
 contribute the same
percentage
 as
breakfast
 in
sodium
(14%), they have a larger
percentage
in
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of
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 saturated fat
of
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apply
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21%. It is
particular
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particularly
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 noticeable that
snacks
 have the biggest share of added
sugar
, which is 42%. In summary, dinner has
essential
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an essential
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 share of three types of nutrients, and
the
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snacks
 contribute the most added
sugar
. Actually,
Breakfast
 involves
in
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apply
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an
Change the article
a
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 stable
percentage
 of
four
meals
 in each type of
nutrients
Fix the agreement mistake
nutrient
show examples
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words four, meals, sodium, sugar, percentage, breakfast, snacks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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