Many employers are employing people with good social skills as well as good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that good social skille are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job ?

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In discussing whether good social skills
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are
as important as technical abilities, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue.
Although
some believe that
proffesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
professionals
professionally
qualifications are more important, I think
cummunicative
of or relating to communication
communicative
and social abilities are equally important. In
this
essay I will provide examples and arguments to support my opinion. One argument in favour of my opinion is that good social
skills establish
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skills, establish
trust and confidence between people, which provides good foundations for
proffesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
interactions.
For example
, an
insurence
promise of reimbursement in the case of loss; paid to people or companies so concerned about hazards that they have made prepayments to an insurance company
insurance
agent with good social skills, who is trying to sell a health policy to a new client will spend more time learning the person in order to understand his needs, rather
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than
going directly into the technical details. Because the agent
spend
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spends
time talking to the client, a trust is established and the client will be more prone to sign the policy.
This
example shows that engaging in a conversation can lead to a fruitful financial relationship. Another argument supporting my opinion is that good communicative
skills create an
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skills to create an
open and inviting working environment, that can optimize
proffesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
achievements. To illustrate, in high-tech
companies
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companies'
company
employers
are frequently working
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as an
intergral
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integrated
integral
team, rather
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than
individuals. When a worker
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has
good interactive skills, he creates worm relationships with his co-
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a person who works at a specific occupation
workers
which makes the team more proactive.
This
demonstrates that a worker with good personal skills can lead to achievement regardless of his qualifications. In conclusion, social skills are an important personal trait that can assist an employer, and his work place substantially.
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worker
should be cherished, because they are the soul of a good company.
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