An increase in consumer goods has damaged our natural environment. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?

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With the growth of goods production as demand has increased, there have been major damages to our surrounding
nature
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. In
this
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essay, I will explain two important causes of damaging the
environment
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and offer solutions.
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with, as stated above the increase in the goods production has damaged our
environment
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for one important reason which is lack of
awareness
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. It is shocking to see how much plastic materials have been dumped in rivers and oceans while people spend their time in the
nature
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. I think
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inappropriate disposal happens because of lack of
awareness
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. People do not know how and why these plastics could influence either their life or
next
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generation in the future. There was a study which showed that
materials
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the materials
of
bottle
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a bottle
bottles
of water, which was
duped
throw away as refuse
dumped
in
oceans
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the oceans
, have been entered
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into
the fish food cycle that human feed on them.
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, if people do not dispose materials appropriately, it will be themselves which be affected eventually. The only solution to
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cause would be to increase people’s
awareness
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through school, social media, and community centres. As well, the government increases funding to support
awareness
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campaigns. The
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reason for
this
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damage is irresponsible industries which produced a large amount of wastes. It has been countless events and scandals which showed industries harmed to the
nature
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. One recent news, which attracts many
people
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peoples'
peoples
attention, was about “Pepsi” company because of dumping wastes in the river in India.
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, our
environment
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will be damaged more, if industries continue to behave irresponsible regarding the waste disposal. The solution for
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could be governments’ restrictive rules. In
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way, governments could increase their control on industries by new
environment
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friendly rules. In conclusion, while people consuming more goods, which have damaged our
environment
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, there should be
awareness
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and new rules which support our
nature
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and mitigate the causes for
this
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problem.
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