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An increase in consumer goods has damaged our natural environment. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?

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With the growth of goods production as demand has increased, there have been major damages to our surrounding
nature
. In
this
 essay, I will explain two important causes of damaging the
environment
 and offer solutions.
To begin
 with, as stated above the increase in the goods production has damaged our
environment
 for one important reason which is lack of
awareness
. It is shocking to see how much plastic materials have been dumped in rivers and oceans while people spend their time in the
nature
. I think
this
 inappropriate disposal happens because of lack of
awareness
. People do not know how and why these plastics could influence either their life or
next
 generation in the future. There was a study which showed that
materials
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the materials
 of
bottle
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a bottle
bottles
 of water, which was
duped
throw away as refuse
dumped
 in
oceans
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the oceans
, have been entered
to
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into
 the fish food cycle that human feed on them.
Thus
, if people do not dispose materials appropriately, it will be themselves which be affected eventually. The only solution to
this
 cause would be to increase people’s
awareness
 through school, social media, and community centres. As well, the government increases funding to support
awareness
 campaigns. The
next
 reason for
this
 damage is irresponsible industries which produced a large amount of wastes. It has been countless events and scandals which showed industries harmed to the
nature
. One recent news, which attracts many
people
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peoples'
peoples
 attention, was about “Pepsi” company because of dumping wastes in the river in India.
Therefore
, our
environment
 will be damaged more, if industries continue to behave irresponsible regarding the waste disposal. The solution for
this
 could be governments’ restrictive rules. In
this
 way, governments could increase their control on industries by new
environment
 friendly rules. In conclusion, while people consuming more goods, which have damaged our
environment
, there should be
awareness
 and new rules which support our
nature
 and mitigate the causes for
this
 problem.
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