it has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Do the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawbacks?

Some people say that there are no limits to globalisation in terms of trade and communication, but that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. While I support

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. One downside is in terms of businesses. Big international firms can move to countries where labour and land for factories is cheap, and may exploit workers.

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, Benetton, a fashion company, was recently criticized for running sweatshops in

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selling expensive branded products in wealthy areas. When

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a company withdraws to move to

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cheaper, it can result in job losses and because no other industry has been developed, the economy can fail.

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, Coca Cola shit its bottling plant in Singapore and moved to Malaysia. Over 200 unskilled workers lost their job and with little other manufacturing work available, became unemployed.

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, business is becoming increasingly international. Even small traders and hobby e-commerce enthusiasts can buy and sell across the globe on sites like E-bay and Amazon.

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competition leads to increasing quality, choice, safety standards and better prices, which

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companies will continue to expand and employ more people. As business and communications spread around the world, poorer countries can take advantage of new technologies, taxes from investment in land, people and factories, and ultimately, it can raise the income of the world’s poorest countries. According to the UN, global trade has triggered strong growth in developing countries from 29% in 1995 to 37% in 2005 and 42% by 2015. In short, while there will always be some drawbacks to change as broad and far reaching as globalisation, I believe that there are more positive aspects tha

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es ones, particularly for the poorest countries in the world’s marketplace