people living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. what are those problems? should the government encourage people to move to regional areas?

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People living in metropolitan cities face a
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major problems in day to day life.In countries like India the regular situation of a common man is the road traffic
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long travel from a particular location, the amount of vehicles which are polluting the environment.The major crisis is motor vehicles which pollute the environment. On a regular basis the volume of motorcycles or cars that run on the road has drastically increased every year over the past few decades.In the current the year the vehicles which are a being used are not up to date as per the government rules, the number of pollution that are caused because of the regular use of the four wheeler.The government has to indicate the population that they have to move back to the point from where they all came from.So that the tons of gases that are released by these vehicles would decrease. For the traffic related problem that the current cities are facing are because of the two wheeler and the 4 wheeler.The sales volume of each product has increased in a very large scale.For
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issue the nation has to take a call to reduce the mass of motor vehicles that are being produced every year and promote the
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financial assistance in time of need
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of public transport or using bicycle which is very healthy solutions for each individual to improve their health.The municipal body has to take few steps to eradicate the
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use
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of individual vehicles and implement for the promotion of public transport. The major cities face a
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of problems because of more people moving into to the cities for work or for studies. The major reason for increasing in population that in turn
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the pollution where
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public move from a different city to the city where they would go
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work and the traffic problems, In major cities like Chennai and Mumbai they have implemented a
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of alternate ways for the public to travel
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like the metro trains
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local buses
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and the suburban train which runs
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more frequently
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every day
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to a very great extent or degree
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of each individual has decreased a
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.In these cities the public travel from a long distance daily to go to their work locations.
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