Nowadays people are working too hard,what is the reason for that. what should employers do to prevent people form this.

An employed individual is regarded as responsible in some climes. Recently it has been observed that people are spending more time working
.
Accept space
.
This
essay would
first
discuss the possible reason that
have led
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has led
to the habit and
also
discuss what employers can do to stop it. One contributing factor that has made different individuals
work
round the clock is rising
cost
of Living. In major cities the
cost
of living is quite on the high side and
this
has a direct effect on the financial muscle of different people.
For example
the
cost
of renting an apartment might be 4 times the
cost
if it were to be in a less urban area.
This
has led people tend to
work
in 2 or 3 places in a day in order to make a considerable income to settle their bills and attend to family needs as well. Employers can put to stop to
this
issue by introducing incentives and benefits that might go a long way in alleviating some of an employee needs. Staff housing is a good option.
For example
, if staff were aware that they would be provided with a staff
quarters
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quarter
close to
work
and have to part with a subsidized amount of their income, their mind would only be focused on
work
without
been distracted
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being distracted
by other issues. Another option is the issue of commensurate wages, most individuals
work
so hard and they don’t get an equal wage for the amount of effort put into
work
, employers should try to ensure that their employees are compensated well. In conclusion,
this
essay has been able to discuss a
major reason
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major reason is that
that is
making people
work
so hard and
also
palliatives that can be done by employers in addressing
this
situation.

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