School and university students learn lessons far better from teacher than from other sources, such as the Internet and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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many times at short intervals

often

argued that using the technology and the media students can teach themselves effectively than their teachers

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academic

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an organization founded and united for a specific purpose

institutions

.I strongly disagree with

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view as

this

institutions

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institution

has well-designed curriculum and misuse of

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technologies

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technology

by students.

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as schools and universities has well-

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the organization of information according to preset specifications (usually for computer processing)

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experts

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expert

whose job is

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designed

and test curriculum by the formal and continuous exams.While other sources that available on the Internet most of them are made without

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something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action

guidance

, so the information provide them is not always accurate. It

may led

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may lead

viewers to gain wrong data, and increase possibility to

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

bad result in their exams.

Thus

, it is better for school goers to study at schools.

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, there is a danger of

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using

the Internet in a wrong way.

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is because,

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these days

this days

TV and the Internet

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various entertainment channels and programmes, which may

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result

in the

distruction

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destruction

distraction

from studies and

also

a poor academic grades.

For example

, the research conducted by the Cambridge Education Department reported that school goers and graduates who use

the the

definite article

the

Internet for studies, spend more time on social media.

Therefore

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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

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for younger users. In conclusion, I completely disagree with that self learning by using the online source is better for

learner

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the learner

learners

than teach by

school teacher

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the school teacher

a school teacher

school teachers

, because schools has an arranged curriculum and a danger of a wrong use of the Internet.

Tue Oct 08 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

246 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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School and university students learn lessons far better from teacher than from other sources, such as the Internet and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. Do you agree

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Nowadays, people are not as fit and healthy as they used to be in the past which creates health issues in the long run. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.