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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays some people believe that museums could be delightful places to amuse people, while others think that educate is aim of museums. In my opinion, museums should be a place with
purpose
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the purpose
a purpose
 of
educate
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educating
. On one side of the argument, there are various reasons why some people think that museums can be enjoyable places to entertain people.
Firstly
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, museums are tourist attractions and
their
people in general
they
 aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects that many people will want to see.
Secondly
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, the average visitor may become bored if they
are have
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have
 to read or listen to too much educational content. Museums often put more of
emphasis
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an emphasis
 on enjoyment rather than learning.
Thirdly
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,
this
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 type of museum is designed to be
visual
with respect to vision
visually
 spectacular and even games as part of it is exhibitions. Despite the above arguments, I am of the view that it is a positive thing if the aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually
this
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 means that the history behind the
museums
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museum
museum's
 exhibits needs to be explained and
this
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 can be done in various ways. As a matter of fact, museums can play important role in teaching people about
history
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the history
, culture, science, and
may
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
 other aspects of life. In conclusion,
although
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 some people want to museums should be enjoyable places for amuse people. I personally believe that museums are educational and informative
also
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 it can impact people and the quality of their life by expressing the past.
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