Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued by certain individuals that older people must be the role-models for youngsters.
However
, there are some individuals who are of the opinion that it is an intuitive feeling –
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
now a days - for them to disregard their elders. Despite there being points
for
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of
both sides of the argument, I believe that they must fanatically follow
grown-ups
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grown-up
in every aspect of
life
.
To begin
with, as per some point of views, young ones in their teens must seek advice from their elders.
This
is because they have more experience in
life
:
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:
how to live and handle certain situations
in
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with
it can be only learnt if you actually encounter them. People in their teens are usually emotional;
therefore
, they take decisions which they later-on regret. If they start following experienced people, they would achieve more success in their later lives.
On the other hand
, there are few people who say that it is by nature for youngsters to not listen to what is being told to them by adults. They want to live the
life
the way they want. According to them times have changed now; situations, ground-realities are different from the ones in the past.
For example
, it is often recommended by
grown-ups
a fully developed person from maturity onward
grownups
to sleep earlier. While it is more productive and has health benefits, they believe that to cope-up with their tough working and study schedules they have to remain awake till late nights.
Thus they
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Thus, they
believe they should live the way they feel comfortable with. In my opinion, I think we should always follow our elders. They know
life
better than
youngsters
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the youngsters
. In my case,
for instance
, I wanted to be a Chef; I pressurized my parents to get their permission. But today I know a friend who went to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
his wish, but now he has no job, as in my County, Pakistan,
this
profession is not considered good for males. To conclude, everyone has their own views with regard to: whether young people should follow their adults or not? I am certain that in order to achieve success in
life
, one must put their old people’s
life
in front to seek guidance from.

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