Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant if necessary. Write atleast 250words

As a reward
of
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for
hard working, getting a well-paid salary may provide a great sense of achievement.
However
, from my perspective,
job
contentment is more significant than big amount earning. The following essay will discuss about the
improtance
the quality of being important and worthy of note
importance
of
job
contantment
happiness with one's situation in life
contentment
.
To begin
with, big salary would not big enough forever.
Such
as for me $200/
hour maybe suppose
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hour, maybe supposes
hour maybe supposes
to be a big salary for now, but it would not be "big" for 3 years later. When the
amout
a quantity of money
amount
of earning not
attrative
pleasing to the eye or mind especially through beauty or charm
attractive
anymore, workers would lose the interest of work for the feeling of
meaningless
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meaninglessness
.
As a result
, the satisfaction from big payment would not be
meantain
kept in good condition
maintained
maintain
mentioned
for a long time for everyone. When the payment of the
job
not fit
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doesn't fit
expetion
the feelings expressed on a person's face
expression
exception
anymore, work on task will need extra motivation for
made
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making
effort
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the effort
an effort
.
In contrast
, satisfy from making effort on works is another story. Try one's best not
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
overwhelmed by mistakes and stumbled by shortage, as well as always learn from failures could be a long journey.
Furthermore
, even the same
job
of the same position,
skillfully
with skill
skilfully
strategically efficiently working need daily self training and endless sharpening.
For instance
, none can work without making
mistake
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mistakes
, but everyone can make
dicision
the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
decision
on how to face that. Someone may choose to ignore it, for its unavoidable. Someone may choose to face it, and learn from it, which can be better for
next
time. And getting better and better would provide the sense of achievement.
Thus
job
satisfaction could be the meaning of hard working. In
conclution
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
, compare to
a mount
a quantity of money
amount
of money as
reward
Suggestion
a reward
rewards
, the sense of
fullfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
of
job
is more worthy.

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