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Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the current scenario, technical advancement had brought huge changes in the working atmosphere. In my opinion, even though it leads to a massive fall of human resources, it is
also
 beneficial for a particular group of employees and the companies as overall. Modern technology has replaced
man power
Suggestion
the man power
 with machine power. In the past, ground level works or manufacturing works were done by humans, but now, for production and packing processes, companies are depending on robotic or machine powers.
For instance
, in a report by CNN news, there is
huge hike
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a huge hike
 in the unemployment rate in the developed countries because of
modernization
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the modernization
 of
workplace
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the workplace
. Another reason for the unemployment is, having
technological modification
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a technological modification
 has reduced the cost of production by less
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 hours.
In addition
, within
few amount
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a little amount
little amount
 of time, there is
huge outflow
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a huge outflow
 of outputs.
In other words
, machines can complete a particular job within the half of time that an individual could take.
Finally
, top hierarchy level employees and companies are beneficial of the developed technologies. Changes in the technical backgrounds bring
comfy
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comfortable
 working and it could
helps
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help
 to produce accurate reports.
For example
, there are so many Enterprise Resource Planning (ERP) software’s are available in the market to plan and execute their daily tasks.
Furthermore
, emails and online banking system
helps
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help
 business to do the operation with the help of a laptop and an internet connection. In conclusion, even though IT revolution had brought
dramatically increase
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a dramatic increase
dramatic increase
 in unemployment of lower hierarchy level employees, it
has bring
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has brought
 fortunes to the economy as overall.
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