Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians and sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other type of Job should be highly paid?

Since the beginning of the

last

century, an ongoing debate has taken place

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about

whether

entertainment

celebrities are paid excessive amounts of

money

compared to their peers in other economic industries. In

this

essay, I will illustrate why I do not support

this

argument.

Firstly

, consumers decide which jobs are going to be paid better, because economics follow supply and demand rules.

Therefore

, industries which are more capable of getting

money

out of

consumers

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consumers'

pockets are going to be more successful than other industries financially.

Consequently

, people working

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in

these industries will be better compensated for their work.

This

is the reason why entertainers are being paid a lot of

money

.

However I

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However, I

do not think that

this

is too much

money

, I think it is a matter of doing the right job at the right time.

Secondly

, the average income for people working

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in

the

entertainment

industry is not much higher than the mean income of other workers.

However

, the nature of

entertainment

industry results in an unequal pay between celebrities and regular workers in

entertainment

. In

fact a

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fact, a

recent study held at Cambridge university concluded that only one in fifty singers has a yearly income above the national annual average pay in England. That shows that

entertainment

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entertain

, like any other industry, gives a handful of people the opportunity to become wealthy.

As a result

, if one argues that some celebrities are being paid too much, one should

also

argue that some people in other industries are being excessively compensated as well. To my way of thinking, I do not think that

this

is a viable dispute. That being said, I think that some jobs should not follow the supply and demand rules of economics when it comes to their pay. These jobs should be supported by the government.

For example

, judges, firefighters, soldiers and police officers should be paid

highly

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higher

. In conclusion, I do not think that entertainers are being paid too much.

However some

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However, some

of them were luckier than others financially.

In addition

to

this

,

this

phenomena can be cited in all industries since the beginning of written history.