Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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IN THE PRESENT SCENERIO, HIGHER STUDY HAS BECOME VITAL PART OF AN INDIVIDUAL LIVE'S. IT IS OFTEN SAID BY SOME THAT PEOPLE WITH TERTIARY

EDUCATION

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COULD ABLE TO GET HIGHER SALARY WORKS. SOME OPPOSE BY SAYING THAT

BESIDES

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THE

EDUCATION

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IT IS SESSENTIAL TO GAIN

EXPERIENCE

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AND INHANCING BASIC MANNERS. THE FOLLOEING ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE VARIOUS REASONS BIHIND THE BOTH SIDE IN DITAIL AND STATE THE OPINION IN THE FAVOR OF HAVING A PRIMARY QUALITIES LIKE INTERPERSONAL COMMUNICATION, BEHAVIOR ETC AND

EXPERIENCE

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IS THE MOST CRUCIAL IN ANY FIELD. TO START WITH THE BACHELOR

DEGREE

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KNOWLEDGE, IT HAS VARIOUS BENEFITS

FIRST

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OF ALL,

FURTHER

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EDUCATION

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GIVE HIGHER STATUS IN THE SOCIETY BY MENAS OF PRIDE AND HONOR. TO ELABORATE, SOCIETY WILL RESPECT A PERSON WHO HAS A GOOD

EDUCATION

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AS THEY THONK THAT HAVING

DEGREE

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MEANS KNOWING EVERYTHING ABOUT THE FILED OR MORE KNOWLEDGE SPECIALLY VILLEGERS. FOR AN EXAMPLE I HAVE A BACHELOR OF DENTAL SURGEON

DEGREE

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AND MY VILLEGE IHIBITANTS USED TO SEE ME AS THEIR ACHIEVEMENT BECAUSE I AM THE FEMALE WHO HAS THE DOCTORATE

DEGREE

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THUS

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, THEY WORSHIPS ME AS SAME AS GOD.

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, NOT EVERYONE WITH GOOD STUDY CAN HAVE GOOD

JOB

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OPTIONS DUE TO LACKE OF BASIC UNDERDSTANDING AND NEEDS.

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, IT IS

ALSO

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EXPERIENCE

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AND SOME PRIMARY QUALITIES PLAYS AN IMORTANT ROLE IN OBTAINING GOOD

JOB

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. THE MOST IMPORTANTLY, BASIC KNOWLEDGE LIKE HOW TO BEHAVE IN A GOOD MANNER IS VITAL AND

ALSO

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HAVING SOME

EXPERIENCE

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OF AN WORK. FOR AN EXAMPLE OF MY RELATIVE IS NOT HAVING A

DEGREE

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BUT STILL WITH HARD AND DEDICTION NOW HE IS IN THE POST OF SENIOR MANGER IN THE ON OF THE USA PHARMACUTICAL COMPANY.

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I STRONGLY BELIEVE IN WORKING HARD AND BUILDING A FUNDAMENTAL SKILLS CAN BE AN ASSET TO GET A GOOD

JOB

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. IF PERSON DOES NOT HAVE THAT SKILLS WHICH SHOULD BE ESSENTIAL FOR EVERYWORK

THEN

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ON ONE GET THE BEST POSITION

JOB

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EVEN THOUGH WITH TERTIARY CERTIFICATES. TO SUM UP, IT SHOULD NOT BE NEGOTIATE THAT IT CAN HELP AT SOME POINT BUT IF PERSON WITHOUT THE

EXPERIENCE

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AND SOFT SKILLS NEVER CAN STAYS FOR A LONGER TIME IN THST HIGHER POSITION. BUT IF

THIS

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TWO CRITERIA COMES TOGATHER

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THAT INDIVIDUAL WILL BE UNSTOPABLE.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

379 words

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

some people find it beneficial to send young children to nursery school before they go to primary school. while others think that it is good to keep them with their family. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern world, the image is becoming a more powerful way of communication than the written word To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter, give details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take

Some people say that university education is the best way to achieve success in life, while others believe it is no longer true. To what extent do you agree or disagree?