Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

IN THE PRESENT SCENERIO, HIGHER STUDY HAS BECOME VITAL PART OF AN INDIVIDUAL LIVE'S. IT IS OFTEN SAID BY SOME THAT PEOPLE WITH TERTIARY
EDUCATION
COULD ABLE TO GET HIGHER SALARY WORKS. SOME OPPOSE BY SAYING THAT
BESIDES
THE
EDUCATION
IT IS SESSENTIAL TO GAIN
EXPERIENCE
AND INHANCING BASIC MANNERS. THE FOLLOEING ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE VARIOUS REASONS BIHIND THE BOTH SIDE IN DITAIL AND STATE THE OPINION IN THE FAVOR OF HAVING A PRIMARY QUALITIES LIKE INTERPERSONAL COMMUNICATION, BEHAVIOR ETC AND
EXPERIENCE
IS THE MOST CRUCIAL IN ANY FIELD. TO START WITH THE BACHELOR
DEGREE
KNOWLEDGE, IT HAS VARIOUS BENEFITS
FIRST
OF ALL,
FURTHER
EDUCATION
GIVE HIGHER STATUS IN THE SOCIETY BY MENAS OF PRIDE AND HONOR. TO ELABORATE, SOCIETY WILL RESPECT A PERSON WHO HAS A GOOD
EDUCATION
AS THEY THONK THAT HAVING
DEGREE
MEANS KNOWING EVERYTHING ABOUT THE FILED OR MORE KNOWLEDGE SPECIALLY VILLEGERS. FOR AN EXAMPLE I HAVE A BACHELOR OF DENTAL SURGEON
DEGREE
AND MY VILLEGE IHIBITANTS USED TO SEE ME AS THEIR ACHIEVEMENT BECAUSE I AM THE FEMALE WHO HAS THE DOCTORATE
DEGREE
.
THUS
, THEY WORSHIPS ME AS SAME AS GOD.
HOWEVER
, NOT EVERYONE WITH GOOD STUDY CAN HAVE GOOD
JOB
OPTIONS DUE TO LACKE OF BASIC UNDERDSTANDING AND NEEDS.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, IT IS
ALSO
AN
EXPERIENCE
AND SOME PRIMARY QUALITIES PLAYS AN IMORTANT ROLE IN OBTAINING GOOD
JOB
. THE MOST IMPORTANTLY, BASIC KNOWLEDGE LIKE HOW TO BEHAVE IN A GOOD MANNER IS VITAL AND
ALSO
HAVING SOME
EXPERIENCE
OF AN WORK. FOR AN EXAMPLE OF MY RELATIVE IS NOT HAVING A
DEGREE
BUT STILL WITH HARD AND DEDICTION NOW HE IS IN THE POST OF SENIOR MANGER IN THE ON OF THE USA PHARMACUTICAL COMPANY.
THUS
I STRONGLY BELIEVE IN WORKING HARD AND BUILDING A FUNDAMENTAL SKILLS CAN BE AN ASSET TO GET A GOOD
JOB
. IF PERSON DOES NOT HAVE THAT SKILLS WHICH SHOULD BE ESSENTIAL FOR EVERYWORK
THEN
ON ONE GET THE BEST POSITION
JOB
EVEN THOUGH WITH TERTIARY CERTIFICATES. TO SUM UP, IT SHOULD NOT BE NEGOTIATE THAT IT CAN HELP AT SOME POINT BUT IF PERSON WITHOUT THE
EXPERIENCE
AND SOFT SKILLS NEVER CAN STAYS FOR A LONGER TIME IN THST HIGHER POSITION. BUT IF
THIS
TWO CRITERIA COMES TOGATHER
THEN
THAT INDIVIDUAL WILL BE UNSTOPABLE.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
  • hybrid approach
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