These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people are migrating in the abroad for the better job and
buissness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
and they think that move aborad gives new
expireance
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experiences
and great opportunities
towords
near
towards
carrer
someone whose employment involves carrying something
carrier
career
carer
and they believe that
this benefits
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these benefits
to the children in these families.
futhermore some
Accept comma addition
Furthermore, some
Furthermore some
furthermore some
people
belives
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that their lives are more difficult, so
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
discuss both views on below. In my country
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
the
compeditions
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competitions
compositions
competition
are dramitically increase
Suggestion
have dramatically increased
are dramatically increase
in each
filds
Suggestion
field
fields
and the people
are think
Suggestion
are thinking
think
are thought
that move to aborad are
gives
Suggestion
given
giving
more better feature and great work
opprtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
so, they start to migrate in other countries.
moreover they
Accept comma addition
Moreover, they
Moreover they
also
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that their children

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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