In many places,new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside.Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In our prevailing era, acquiring a
land
to construct a house is very expensive and demanding. Most of the towns have been completely occupied so people move on for village terrain for building homes. Construction of new cosy homes along the
countryside
is more popular nowadays
;
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;
but it is not advisable since we will be in demand for food.Farmlands has been destroyed to raise the buildings which will result in decline of natural resources and it is inevitable.In India building homes along the
countryside
is becoming more common now. I can give a glimpse of the surroundings of my own house as
a
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an
instance
,
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,
to prove building homes at villages result in lack of food.Our Apartment is in a village and it is being built by destroying a farmland. Food prices has been gradually raised for past
fewyears
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few years
since it is becoming very demanding. Water scarcity would exist if
this
action of
rasing
increasing in quantity or value
raising
racing
rousing
homes along villages persists
.
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.
Through construction of four -
storeyed
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Storeyed
street
apartment in a
land
,
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,
water
willl
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
well
not be in abundance nor it will not be sufficient for all houses. In a recent survey
,
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,
it is said that during summer condos or apartments which is built along the villages suffer water scarcity
.
Accept space
.
Destruction of
countryside
land
will result in declining of available natural resources and in turn leads to the demand which cannot be fulfilled. Demand of
land
drives people towards
countryside
for building their homes.Food is of vital importance for all humans, it is being produced from the
land
in our villages by destroying the lands human lives will be in danger.

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  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
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  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
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  • Rural areas
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