Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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nowadays one huge

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jams is government pressures or decides which they are simple and benefit to

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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