Some people think that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sport starts are paid too much. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Which other type of job should be highly paid?

Few individuals ponder that celebrities are overpaid. I disagree with that notion and believe that it requires hard work to become famous. In my opinion, teachers should have handsome salaries because they are the ones preparing our kids to grow up and become successful,

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law abiding

citizens. The essay will discuss the above mentioned points in detail.

Firstly

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, being a known person is not easy and it is a continuous struggle to maintain being popular,

hence

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, the reward is high earnings.

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, Ronaldo, the well known soccer player, did not become a famous just overnight. It took him years to practise and master the skills of the game. He

consistantly

in a systematic or consistent manner

consistently

trains himself to stay fit and continues to improve his techniques. If he stops all the

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hard work

and start to take it easy, he will not be famous anymore and will loose all the glory he has achieved so far.

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, teachers shall have very handsome payouts since they are preparing our future generations to handle challenges and become

succesful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

and good people. It is very important for teachers to have a sustainable source of income so that they are not worried about managing their expenses since they have a huge responsibility of training and preparing the tomorrow's

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individuals. If they are

accupide

held or filled or in use

occupied

by the thoughts of managing their expenses, they will not be able to focus on the greater responsibility of training pupils. For

exmaple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

, according to The Times Of India, a national

news paper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

,

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the success rate

of students getting hired after graduation from private

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an educational institution

schools

where teachers are paid way higher than a government school is 70% higher. In some people's view, very well known personalities are paid too

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much, to

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refers to the speaker or writer

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totally disagree and in my opinion their income levels are justified by the struggle they go through to become known and continue to maintain it. As per my views, teachers must be paid very well so that they could focus on building

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confidence

and successful individuals of tomorrow's society.