Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be usefull in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

From the experienced people point of view who expected the best future for the graduates, it is undoubtedly that choosing selected subjects based on salary and stability is the best choice.
However
, I literally believe that freedom of choices will produce the best outcome for the students and the
economy
.
Firstly
, human being
are
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is
different with different background and interests.
Ones
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Onus
should not assume a role and position
for
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in
others future. A shark will thrive under the sea, but will not survive in a pond, matter not the land. Assuming everybody to study in a certain field will result in a negative outcome as many would
suffers
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suffer
from studying subjects unrelated to their interest or their proficiency.
Few
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Fewer
students will be successful, but many will be stuck in a lower
level occupation
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level, occupation
for the rest of their
life
with a feeling that they are worthless person that could not achieve anything. In fact, he might just be another shark that was thrown in a pond.
Second
, for an
economy
to function, it requires the whole system to grow and be more productive, not just one particular function. Agricultural sector, tourist sector are
parts
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part
of an
economy
. Putting every student in one field will reduce the productivity of the other sectors,
hence
, negative total result
to
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of
the
economy
is likely to occur. To have a healthy
economy
where its citizens may have a wishful
life
require improvement in all sectors and that will hardly happen should all students are forced to choose science or technology fields.
Lastly
, students who are choosing subjects based on their interests and proficiency tends to gain more
life
achievements and
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
than those who are forced to choose subjects that they do not wish for. In conclusion, putting everyone in the same field does not guarantee the success of
life
or even in finance.
Nevertheless
,
life object
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life, object
and goal are much more than just money in which I strongly believe that students should have freedom to make their own decision for their future.
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