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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?

#people #exercise #time #health
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to give a valuable feedback along with improvements on behalf of my team and other clients. Hope you are aware of the
last
 month's meeting held by our prestigious clients for our upcoming product in the
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a public promotion of some product or service
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on one occasion
once
 the banquet hall at your hotel. Most of the participants were feeling happy with the infrastructure and maintenance of your hotel rooms. Especially, the garden area, everyone who came for meeting started discussions about that area since it has a special attraction. The food arrangements and the taste of all varieties of cuisine is simply awesome. But, unfortunately, they were not satisfied with the quantity of the food. Since it was tasty food, everyone was
ate
Suggestion
eating
 more than usual. If you could have provided enough quantity of dishes, they might have impressed more than any other hotels in our city. I have gathered feedback from all members of the meeting individually, most of them given a generic suggestion on the western culture cuisine's, which it requires significant improvement. It's because of all the client's who attended the meeting are indigenous of that western countries. Looking forward, great to see these additional changes at your hotel for upcoming events.
Yours
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Sheriff
Faithfully, Shareeef

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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