You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: • describe the problem with the equipment • explain what happened when you phoned the shop • say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding the microwave that I purchased on 16th October
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2019 from your department stores at
Utako
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branch which is not functioning.
This
equipment cannot be used because the start button is stiff.
Consequently
, I cannot power it on despite the fact that the plug is functioning. In order to rectify
this
issue, I called the
help lines
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which I saw on the receipt and
Mr.
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Pedro advised me on what to do. The
first
step was to send a snapshot of the receipt that was issued to me after a successful purchase.
Furthermore
, he
also
advised me to send a complaint letter to
this
email: [email protected] for verification. Unfortunately, they neither responded to my complaint mail
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nor resolved the issue, despite the fact that I followed his instruction,
However
, I would appreciate it if you would give me a new replacement since I have not used the product.
Besides
that, I believe I am entitled to
this
because the warranty policy said
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must be made within 3 days of purchase. Thank you for your time while I await
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positive feedback from you. Yours faithfully, Cynthia Rex.
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