Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many believe
History
is the one of the school
cousres
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course
courses
that should be considered very essential while others argue that in these days and age other branches
such
as
Science
and
technology
deserve more attention In my view every branch of
science
is important and essential and we should not choose one and leave
others
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the others
. Many people consider
History
as the most needed
subject
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subjects
and it is mostly due to the fact that humankind end to repeat its
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
over the time,
in other
words we
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words, our
words our
people what previous generations did and almost get the same results
therefore
if we study
history
we could learn
alot
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a lot
from what our ancestors did and what they achieve by that and what were its
consequencies
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
consequence
. If we figure out what they did wrong and what made them
successful
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successful, then
then
it is possible to avoid their mistakes
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in bed
abed
and
copy their success
acordingly
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accordingly
.
as
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As
appossed
being in opposition or having an opponent
opposed
to the view of people who think
History
is the number one subject to study in schools there is another view how prefer
science
and
technology
. If we only focus on the
History
then
there will be no future and
inovation
a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovation
innovations
invasion
because it is
inovation
a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovation
resulted from
science
that enabled humans to prosper In other
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words the
huge
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
of countries and nations is mainly resulted from
technology
and to continue it we should study
this
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a division of some larger or more complex organization
branch
more and more. In conclusion,
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even though
there are
to
being one more than one
two
appossing
characterized by active hostility
opposing
belife
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beliefs
belief
believe
about the importance of
history
in comparison with
science
and
technology
I think both of them are essential and should be considered
important equaly
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equally important
important equally
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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