The diagrams below show the changes that has taken place in village park

The maps show the changes
of
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the village
park
in 10 years .
Overall
, after 10 years , the village
park
has more entertainment services
such
as Picnic
Area
, cycle path ,
children
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children's
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soft play
area
and toilet . The entrance of the
park
still stays in
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the Northweast
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Northweast
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Northwest
of the map . There is a cycle path
show
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up around the
park
. The car
park
in the west of the
park
expanded to contain from 20 cars to 50 cars . And the tennis
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court
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cour
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court
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scale is doubled, contrary to the narrowing of the football pitch. The
children
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children's
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plat
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play
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area
is improved
in to
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the children
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children
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children's
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play
area
and
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the children
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children
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children's
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soft play
area
. At the east of the
park
. Below
the
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is the
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children
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children's
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plat
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play
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area
. The toilet appears . 10 years ago.
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The southwast
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Southwast
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Southwest
area
used to be a vacant
area
. But at
ther
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the
. the picnic
area
show
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up
next
to the
boatin
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boating
boat in
boat
lake. Which is changed from the pond . the woods which cover the right
area
of the pond , now it has been replaced by the cafe
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, area, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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