Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view

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It is argued that the cognitive

talents develops

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talents, develop

talents develop

to a greater extent when performing the tasks collaboratively

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I strongly agree with that suggestion because of the benefits it brings to pupils.The

first

part of

essay

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the essay

will highlight as how the mass tasks will help the pupil in developing their communication skill and

then

discuss how these

collaboration

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collaborations

is valued by universities and organizations.

Firstly

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Limiting an individual to work on single basis acts as

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barrier in developing the communication skills.Many humans feel shy to interact and mingle with others in expressing their opinions thinking that they are inferior to others of the same age and they develop stage phobia which stays strong in their lives until

there

of them or themselves

their

last

stage.

For example

recent study

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a recent study

the recent study

from an article shows that student who works individually during their early schooling days who are

faces

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facing

severe

ramiffications

the act of branching out or dividing into branches

ramifications

when they are allowed to participate in a group discussion.Since they are not aware

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how to behave according to the article it was reported to be found that they have

phobia

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a phobia

of communicating in a group

although

they have strong opinions and concrete ideas involved in the discussion.

Secondly

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In the growing number of graduates a year the

humman

characteristic of humanity

human

resource

developmenet

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

developments

Corporates

of or belonging to a corporation

corporate

and multi conglomerate companies

are now looking

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is now looking

to shortlist candidates based on how an individual mingles with others

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Intepersonal

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Interpersonal

skills

such

responsiblity

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

delegation

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planning and coordination are most important in an organization and the companies are always

recruitting

recruiting

recreating

the candidates who are very good in interpersonal skills.To illustrate

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US Stock company Deshaw recruited a candidate based on the interpersonal skills and not on the academic skills.

Furthermore

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in a press conference they echoed that " The interpersonal skills are the inherent skills which cannot be taught by

amn

indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise

organization

such

us whereas

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ours, whereas

ours whereas

we have experts who can teach the academic skills on the run for our prospective employees " In conclusion,

pupil

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pupils

the pupil

should be allowed to partake the things in the group which will

certaily

definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')

certainly

help them to build the interpersonal skills and

also

make them

to stay

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stay

unique in the crowd from the recruitment stands.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

349 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

intellectual skills
group activities
collaborative learning
critical thinking
problem-solving
communication
interpersonal skills
diverse perspectives
creativity
individual study
personal reflection
autonomy
learning styles
approaches

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Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view

Include an introduction and conclusion

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