Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Sam, I acknowledge the receipt of your

complain

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note delivered to me through the estate manager today. The continuous humming sound was from my

industriaI

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industrial

sewing equipment which I had to move into my flat on Tuesday evening. After the heavy rain on Sunday evening, there had been a power outage at Gbagada where my fashion office is situated. I was in an extremely tight situation due to an obligation to deliver

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apply

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seven dresses to a client for her bridal train outfit. Since

power

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the power

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supply is uninterrupted in our estate, I was

therefore

compelled to move in my equipment and work from home all night in other to meet the deadline. I apologise for the disturbance caused especially during the very late hours at night. Please extend my apologies to Maria and Binta who were

also

affected by the noise. Having completed the client's order I would be moving the equipment back to my office today without fail. I will

also

work on getting an alternative power supply for my fashion store so as to avoid having to take

such

action

subsequently

. Your neighbour Motolani

Submitted by motolanid on Sat Oct 19 2019

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

187 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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