Samsung is specially known for android phone, however it also manufactures TVs, tablets, smartwatches, virtual reality headsets, home theater and audio, desktop computers, laptops, monitors, printers, memory devices, home appliances and security/monitoring systems. With this wide range of products sold all over India and worldwide, they have to provide repair service. Hence, they start providing repair service all over the India even if it hills area, villages or any other area.

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Providing a repair facility by a company in every corner of

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the country

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company

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companies

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service. Samsung came up with

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the idea

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which just so heart melting and emotional. To make it more emotional they choose

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as their clients and that

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include children with disabilities and

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a twist

the twist

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, someone call to Samsung customer care about the problem they were facing with Samsung tv and they were requesting to fix it before evening because of some particular reason.

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that was a hill region, technician reached there and fixed the tv just few minutes before they want to.

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that lady rings a bell and call children

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that

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with disable children and everyone was waiting for a singing show because one girl from that

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went to that show for singing competition and they all want to

listen

perceive (sound) via the auditory sense

hear

her performance. Samsung tried to show that their service and products will never let you down. Impact

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After

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story

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came out in market Samsung just hit the India digital market because electronic device somehow need repair at a certain time in life and Samsung became the

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origination that provide repair customer service in every part of

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the country

. It shows the major impact when people found an emotional attachment with

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. User targeted

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Samsung targeted each and every person that

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a Samsung product in any region of

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the nation

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because they know that electronic device get disturbed even with small mis happenings.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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284 words

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organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. what are the possible problems and solutions?

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