In recent years, tourists have paid attention to preserving both the culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people think that it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is argued that there is no chance for tourists to take responsibility in protecting the environment and culture of
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the host countries
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, I disagree with
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view and believe that
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is a worthy aim that can be achieved by various ways.
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, if everyone was equipped with the knowledge of cultural diversity and the vital importance of the environment, they would be more aware of their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
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, children should be educated to avoid throwing rubbish into surroundings or
touching fragile
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touching, fragile
historical objects in museums when they travel abroad.
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that, western
holiday-makers
someone on vacation; someone who is devoting time to pleasure or relaxation rather than to work
holidaymakers
who flock to tourist destinations in Asian countries should wear suitable clothes because they are insensitive to local youngsters there.
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could prevent children from copying negative attitudes
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as rowdiness and outbound tourists may set a good
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of good manners.
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, it is possible to promote cultural differences through both local and international media in order to reduce the risk of having
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unintentional
offensive actions to indigenous practices. The clearest
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of
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is that cow which is an edible animal in most countries is a sacred animal and is
worshiped
regarded with deep or rapturous love (especially as if for a god)
worshipped
in festivals in India. Without
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knowledge, tourists may bring with
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them a cow
meat and
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could leave a bad impression on
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the locals
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, local authorities could enact and enforce strict rules on protecting the environment and core traditional value, which could act as a deterrent. In Singapore,
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, throwing away garbage, even a small thing like chewing gum could be fined severely and
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rule is widely-known in many nations.
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, every tourist coming to
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country abides by rules and makes efforts to preserve historical sites as well as natural scenery. In conclusion, I would contend that sustainable tourism development could be achieved through education, media, and laws, and tourists could definitely become culpable for the environmental and cultural problems.
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