Some people think that public health of a country can be improved if the government make laws regarding nutritious food but others think that it is a matter of personal choice and personal responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Having a choice over consumption of certain
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products, not necessary
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nutrition
is one of the most fundamental human right. So the
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should never impose any law to promote or Ban certain
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products. As it is a direct attack on our human rights, it may cause a breakdown in
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industry resulting thousands of job-loss, promoting and banning certain
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product can always put a certain amount of negative effect on our daily lives as there was a reason behind some people consuming it at
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place.
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, selecting meals to eat is a human responsibility and the fundamental right. The
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shouldn’t pass any kind of laws to cut down our choices of
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. In a democratic Nation, the
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job is to provide
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for all of its citizens, but not to put a law from refraining us from certain
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of our choice.
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, the
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industry of any country is built upon all the
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products that are available in the market. Thousands of people’s jobs depend on the sale of certain
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products. Now, if the authority starts
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promotes
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products,
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the
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products which are not nutritious will face a dip in their sales and which will result in loss of jobs for thousands of people associated with the item which will eventually make the whole market crumble down. Now, there is a notion that the
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should promote certain healthy foods to improve health of the general public. But
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notion is not completely true. As we don’t know the complete nutritional value of any products. Each day new usages of certain
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product’s is being discovered. Consider, chocolate ice cream, which for the past couple of decades considered to be a junk
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. But in the recent years, study shows that chocolate ice cream is great at relieving stress, combating anxiety and elevating mood and we still can’t say that these are the only usage of the chocolate Ice cream with certainty. So we can say is that if a
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product is getting sold in the market,
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there are certain reasons people are paying the price and regulating these
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products may result a negative effect on our daily lives. So, to conclude any kind of action taken by the authority to increase nutritional value may cause a human rights violation, breakdown of
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business with thousands of job loss and huge impact on the daily routine of human lives. So choosing to eat anything independently should remain a human right and responsibility.

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