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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #men #women #qualities #jobs
Speeding has become
one
 of the main problems in urban areas. In order to tackle
this
 problem, it is often thought by
many that adding
Suggestion
adding that many
 speed cameras on the roads by the government is
one
such
 a measure, which eventually results in catching the violators. Speeding has become
one
 of the main problems in urban areas. In order to tackle
this
 problem, it is often thought by
many that adding
Suggestion
adding that many
 speed cameras on the roads by the government is
one
such
 a measure, which eventually results in catching the violators. Speeding has become
one
 of the main problems in urban areas. In order to tackle
this
 problem, it is often thought by
many that adding
Suggestion
adding that many
 speed cameras on the roads by the government is
one
such
 a measure, which eventually results in catching the violators.
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  • gender roles
  • inherent qualities
  • social dynamics
  • merit-based selection
  • advancements in technology
  • levelled the playing field
  • gender stereotypes
  • equal opportunities
  • physical differences
  • workplace
  • evolving
  • traditional view
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