today more an more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the sahara desert or the antartic. what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist to visit such places?

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In the modern world, historic monuments and natural landscapes
has always attracted
Suggestion
have always attracted
people from different parts of the world. Nowadays, people have taken a step
further
by visiting places where the forces of nature are extreme and dangerous
such
as deserts and the
antartic
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Antartic
. Places
such
as deserts and
snow desert
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snow, desert
have extreme weather conditions and the possibility of life sustaining over
such
regions are very difficult and
this
excitement for them to explore various parts of the world lures them to
such
places. People
also
learn about the various
habitats living
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habitats, living
in those areas and what are their tactics to survive in
such
harsh environment.
In addition
, they get to know the necessary skills to survive.
Such
as things to eat or drink, how to build a shelter? Or how to catch a prey?
On the contrary
, visiting
such
places could be dangerous or life threatening.
Firstly
, travelling is an issue as there are not many options for transportation.
Secondly
, in case of emergencies there is not much of medical support available. In areas
such
as deserts where a bite from a venomous snake could be fatal and requires immediate medical attention cannot be provided soon in
such
regions.
Lastly
, some people may lose track or could not find their way back and might get lost in
such
regions. There
has
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have
many reports of couples, individuals getting lost or bodies of people found. Overall, tourist visiting
such
regions is contentious. Everyone has a different perspective regarding
this
but people should consider visiting
such
places with extreme caution

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unique natural landscapes
  • ecosystems
  • extreme environments
  • adaptability
  • boosts local economies
  • global awareness
  • conservation efforts
  • environmental degradation
  • human activity
  • potential danger
  • health risks
  • extensive preparation
  • financial investment
  • cultural insensitivity
  • exploitation
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